Should not be on Newgrounds
Newgrounds should not be a place for showing demos of games you have to pay for. This place is not for companies, it is for individuals who want to showcase their abilities.
As for the game itself, the tutorial should mention the trash can for when you pick up an item and suddenly have to do something else.
It was great, but...
...I was a bit let down at the end.
In fact, I kind of felt left...without. What happened?? I examined the dead body, it jumped at me, and...POW! Opening screen!
Besides that, gameplay was really smooth. Using "F" to switch weapons was a bit awkward (Since "S" wasn't used, perhaps that key?), but other than that, not bad at all!
Tutorials do more than show what to do...
1: The music was pretty annoying, which is horrible if you want to look around a tutorial.
2: Tutorials on actionscript should show more than what to type in. They should also explain what each line does, so the user can do different things with it (such as play with different things in the preloader).
This is the same tutorial I see pretty much every week. Do something different if you're going to make a tutorial.
I dig it
Not too bad. I'd just say add in powerups, and explain the whole egg closing thing (I'm assuming that's what it is, anyway).
Other than that, great job!
Someday, I'll get an animation up. I swear.
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